苍梧诗集----胡灵 [复制链接]

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桃花脸，琉璃盏，满席芳黛欢声远。光阴残，青丝染，一盅红酒，饮干思念，算！算!  算!

秋潭目，玲珑步，梦中曾遇千千度。朱门阔，寒门落，初情虽在，镜花湖月，错！错！错 ！

                                                                        中华 新韵
                                                                  
                                                                        《  江城子》
                                                                    
                                                                            伤   情

                                                          

                                                                  一生难忘少时愁，
                                                                  象春江，
                                                                  去还留。  
                                                                  泪润睫眸，
                                                                  心似冷霜揉。
                                                                  暗 系千结如问道？
                                                                  低垂首，
                                                                  语还休。

                                                                  几番梦遇故人游，
                                                                  旧时妆，
                                                                  笑含羞，
                                                                  欲诉柔肠，
                                                                  忽自立荒丘。
                                                                  泪眼醒观窗外事，
                                                                  天镜照，
                                                                  正寒秋。
                                                                  

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                                                          江城子
                                                 《庆八一思军旅》
                                                           胡灵

   寒窗读罢入军营。少年情，慕功名，演武堂前，时刻盼提兵。为教铁舟如利箭，研技艺，伴星明。

   三十戎马踏波行。破云屏，过东瀛，仿勒燕然 ， 几度下南庭。会驾蛟龙穿巨浪，头沥沥，体泠泠。

注①破云屏，过东瀛:   冲破层层云雾屏障，穿过日本海峡。
②仿勒燕然:  效仿东汉大将军窦宪打败匈奴后在外蒙的燕然山（今叫杭爱山）勒石记功的壮举。
③几度下南庭:  指几次巡航到南海周边国家

   中华 新韵

                                                                        《  江城子》

                                                                            伤   情



                                                                  一生难忘少年愁，
                                                                  似江流，
                                                                  几时休。  
                                                                  常润睫眸，
                                                                  心似冷霜揉。
                                                                  暗 隐千结恐问道
                                                                  低垂首
                                                                  语含羞

                                                                  几番梦遇故人游，，
                                                                  眉如柳
                                                                  妆无修，
                                                                  欲诉柔肠，
                                                                  忽自伫荒丘。
                                                                  泪目醒观窗外事，
                                                                  天镜照，
                                                                  正寒秋。

                                                                     满 庭  芳                     
             《 春日伤怀》
                                                               日月轮袭，人生几许？又经秋叶春葩。百年刚半，青鬓早霜华。多少匆匆往事，成烟靄，荣辱由它。 叹年少，谁能得意，潘岳伴娇娃？

      非夸。今道是，青春戎马，知命还家，倦江海飘零，饮尽风沙。孤旅天緣何处，凭谁问，枫落云涯？可怜我，依稀梦里，都是旧时花。*

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